Feedback for Other Videos

Over the last week, due to every group having finished their first drafts, we have all come together and watched each others and given our opinions and feedback based on the current mark scheme. The mark scheme is as follows:

So as a result of looking through the mark scheme I will looking for the a list of various criteria. These include:
1. Is the footage appropriate to the task set?
2. How is the framing of the shot and does it include and exclude elements as appropriate?
3. Does it use a variety of shots and distances, holding a steady shot?
4. What good was the selecting of the mise en scene including colour, figure, lighting, objects and setting?
5. Has the editing made the meaning apparent to the viewer?
6. Have they used a variety of transitions and used other effects selectively?
7. Do the images and sound go well together?
In order to access top marks the video needs to show all of the above excellently and this means that the videos will be as close to a professional standard as possible. Even though we looked at all of the videos the one that everyone in our group gave feedback to was the video for the artist Sempa. which was 'Walking with the Elephants':

After watching the video this is the feedback which we gave:
Elona:
'I like this video and I feel like the drawings on the chorus make it really unique and I like the ghosting effect that is put on in the "bang" of the verse. Although maybe this could be used more as it looks more of a successful accident at the moment. Also I really like the thought beats that have been shown however there are too many flashes at times which makes it a little annoying to watch.'
Angel:
'I think the drawings were really effective throughout the chorus, but I thought that due to it predominantly only being in te chorus, it can make it a bit sudden and not link well with the rest of the video. So I think to improve it the drawing should be incorporated more during the rest of the video.'
Charlie:
'I thought there was a good variation of shots and the settings (mise en scene) used fit the song well. I also thought that the picture art for the chorus showed a good level of editing and time taken. However, at times I felt that the lip synching was off and it was a shame that they repeated the exactly the footage for both chorus'.'
Georgia:
'I really liked the idea behind the drawing shots and the drone shots looked really professional and smooth. One thing I would suggest that they improve though, is the text of the title at the beginning looked armature and if that is changed it will make the whole video come together way better.'