After we got feedback we adjusted our video in order to improve the aspects of the first draft that people did not like. Below is the feedback that we acted on and the evidence of the changes which we made.
In response to the feedback we were given, some of the changes we made to the video were significant where as others were more discreet. We replaced some of the shots that were too shaky and unstable such as the shot before the transition of the first and second costume. However, we didn't want to change too many of the moving shots as it may take away the home video style of our video and make it more high production.
We also made a big change to the ending of the video, as we were told it was too anti climatic and a disappointment. We decided to film a whole sequence of her looking through all of the photos we took, which was represented using the black and white flash in the video. This added the more warm, homely feel to our video which we wanted to achieve. The photography theme is also clearly established at the end. We also added more colour correction across the video so that it flowed smoothly and looked more professional.
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