Music Video First Draft Feedback

Now that we ave completed our first draft, we went in search of feedback, particularly from our peers. We asked them to watch the video and while the were watching, through the use of the mark scheme to give us feedback on what they thought about the video. From this feedback that we have received from them, we are able to take on board both positives and negatives that were said about our video.
By taking on this suggested feedback we will be able to make sufficient improvements to our first draft and as a result improve our final mark for this section. This is because, by changing the bad sections that people noticed and keeping the parts people liked will all together create a good final video.